You see it all around you
It permeates the air
The faces of friends show it
Yet inside you its not there.
Without it you feel empty
But can't seem to get it back
You wish, and hope, and pray, and dream
To find the happiness you lack.

You see it all around you It permeates the air The faces of friends show it Yet inside you its not there. Without it you feel empty But can't seem to get it back You wish, and hope, and pray, and dream To find the happiness you lack. |
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Try again. Fail again. Fail better.
~ Samuel Beckett ~
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in cristal sphere you catch sight only our passion
Again, I like the restrainedness, not revealing what it is that you lack until the end, but then rereading it you find it obvious. It makes you want to read it more than once, which is great
Its true, understatement makes it very real. I feel it.
Well done.
I hope you find it soon.
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Music. Beautiful, beautiful music.</i?
Good concept, you realized with the right lenght and perfect rythm.
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"freedom is never the result of compromise" - ~nemophylia
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